Dear EEschw07,

I just looked to our class blog for a little advice and I found your post. I am struggling with poem #2. Thanks for the inspiration. I am attempting that same style. The first poem was easy. I didn't want to give it away before you read my poem (the first 1), if we are still doing that crtitique thing? But I am going to tell you. It is actually really weird because I wrote my first poem backward. I am not sure why. It's called gninnuR. I started at the bottom of the page and moved my cursor above that written line, every time. I am not attempting that way for this second one, but maybe you could try it. I am creating this backward story in narrative, paragraph form, is that called prose? I am a little new to this poetry thing. I always written goofy poems to my friends. For example, I wrote a poem tonight to my team about washing their hands. It's called Flu, Flu, woopty-do! :
The bug is out,
it's on the run.
Have you heard?
Its not very fun.
Vommit in your mouth, *** in your pants,
A large headache, and maybe even cramps!
Temperatures could skyrocket,
so pop, lock and drop it!
Fear not for this little insect,
Learn the proper ways to disenfect.
Wash your hands to reject...
all those gross bacteria
Have no fearia
Drop it girls, drop it,
we've done our duty in the fall
tell that bug to take a crawl!!!!
Sanitize, disinfect, go team go....we THE best!!!!!!

I have a feeling this could be embarassing in the morning. For the sake of our blogging and this class community, we are all friends here. Don't judge.