Thursday, February 12, 2009

I agree with everyone about last class. I thought it ran efficiently and I enjoyed hearing exactly what everyone's poem was about. Also, thank you for the comments about my poem.
For assignment 3 I really enjoyed the idea. I liked how we already had a basis for this assignment from last class when we played the guessing game with everyone's poem. I tried to write about the feeling of winning this time. Specifically just the image I have of winning when I used to play competitive sports. I think I described it pretty well however it might be to obvious. I also decided to end the poem by saying what it was. The effect I wanted to gain from this was starting off with a more broad description of winning and moving towards the specifics.

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